I would like to recall one morning sometime last February -
a morning when the sun was so shy to come out of the horizon. The sky was so covered with gray clouds. Sporadic
drizzles came and finally the rain. Feeling lazy to do anything productive, I decided to spend my
time at our covered terrace just looking at my surroundings and listening to the chirping of birds.
My cell phone rang. It was from a friend – a special friend and my
almost daily chatmate, located in the
wilderness (her description). A message in haiku! Joyfully taking the bait, I replied in haiku. And that started our exchange for the next
hundred minutes. It was a unique way of updating ourselves with the current
happenings in each other's current world. We enjoyed the exchange so much and even jokingly
labelled it a “haiku war”. Of course in between the haiku poems were lively comments and laughter. I can shout to the world that it surely made our day!
Confronted with the challenge to make a daily post, and
caught with so many concerns for the day that night came with not a single
haiku spun, my cell phone came to my rescue. Good thing I had that “war” kept in
my chat box. Too precious to delete. So, with my friend's permission, here I am sharing it in this blog.
Friend : running through the rain
a girl in yellow raincoat
laughs like morning sun
Me : lingering in bed
circles of water i see
through a window blade
Friend : some kids braved the rain
soaked to the skin, unperturbed
but how can that be?
Me : oh that bird again
my early morning delight
twig shakes as it leaves
Friend : through the foggy fields
then to hazy mountain side
a hawk disappeared
Me : grayish is the sky
promise of a drab morning
coffee smells so good
Friend : used to be just one
now there's a couple of them
egrets in the yard
Me : rain, rain, and more rain
pools of water surround us
tank overflowing
laughs like morning sun
Me : lingering in bed
circles of water i see
through a window blade
Friend : some kids braved the rain
soaked to the skin, unperturbed
but how can that be?
Me : oh that bird again
my early morning delight
twig shakes as it leaves
Friend : through the foggy fields
then to hazy mountain side
a hawk disappeared
Me : grayish is the sky
promise of a drab morning
coffee smells so good
Friend : used to be just one
now there's a couple of them
egrets in the yard
Me : rain, rain, and more rain
pools of water surround us
tank overflowing
Friend : the fog is thinning
sun's persistence struggling through
but then, so does rain
Me : a favorite perch
of a number of small birds
tv antenna
sun's persistence struggling through
but then, so does rain
Me : a favorite perch
of a number of small birds
tv antenna
Friend : on the other side
battle between sun and rain
remains to be seen.
Me : wind getting colder
and seemingly stronger too
branches wildly dance
battle between sun and rain
remains to be seen.
Me : wind getting colder
and seemingly stronger too
branches wildly dance
Friend : firewood is crackling
a sight and smell that i love
oh that homey fire
Me : eraserheads singing
two puppies so entertained
facing amplifier
a sight and smell that i love
oh that homey fire
Me : eraserheads singing
two puppies so entertained
facing amplifier
Friend : under a table
a bundle of firewood lay
i need a broomstick
Me : legs, feet getting cold
puppies scratching and licking
giggles can't resist
a bundle of firewood lay
i need a broomstick
Me : legs, feet getting cold
puppies scratching and licking
giggles can't resist
Me : wind getting calmer
swaying branches calmer too
will the sun smile soon?
swaying branches calmer too
will the sun smile soon?
Friend : can't say sun's winning
until it comes shining through
till sky becomes blue
Much as we wanted to continue something came up so, our exchange had to end.
what a haiku war indeed! i really and specially enjoyed this post...
ReplyDeletekeep them coming!
who wouldn't? for a haiku lover like you that is!
Deletekeep them coming! you mean more haiku wars???