Wednesday, July 10, 2013






the weight too heavy
small lemon branches bow down
humble submission


oo0oo


just a few weeks more
the taste of fresh lemonade
cooling down parched throats

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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 10, 2013 at 6:24 PM

    a sweet surrender
    to things expected to be- -
    for a lemonade

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    1. UnknownJuly 10, 2013 at 6:34 PM

      how quick you've spun a haiku as comment. i love it! mine pales in comparison to yours.

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  2. AnonymousJuly 11, 2013 at 12:39 AM

    Ang lemoncito
    Lupig ang sa merkado
    Dagko kaajo
    - ian

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    1. UnknownJuly 11, 2013 at 7:38 AM

      dakung pahiyom
      sa binisayang haiku
      pero sipyat lang

      anonymous pero naa diay ngan. must be part of the fun. and hey, that’s lemon baja and not lemonsito. much bigger jud ang lemon kaysa lemonsito.

      i look forward to your comments in my future posts. pwede pud moatras ka hahaha!

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  3. AnonymousJuly 11, 2013 at 4:31 PM

    tempted to join in
    sa haikung binisaya
    hehehehehe

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